by TheTalkMan
Amazing. Simply amazing. The ending was absolutely brilliant. You somehow managed to tie all the previous chapters into one decisive ending. I honestly didn't think you would be able to do so. I know the amount of sex within the series might bother some, but I honestly think that without the sex, the series would be totally different. To me, through sex, you were able to truly demonstrate the aggressiveness and dominance of the various Cline women. Could have there been a little less sex? Yes, sure, but all in all, it didn't detract from the story one ounce. I know at the end you mentioned how these characters might be featured in future stories; however, my opinion is that you should not. You have a perfect ending within the series, and if you were to feature these characters, it would detract from the closure in this last installment. Anyway, keep up the amazing work. I cannot wait for your next masterpiece.
AWESOME!!!! Simply 1 of the best stories I've read here on Literotica. I am also in the process of reading your other stories and got to say I am looking forward to all the stories yet to come.again.....AWESOME!!!!
I can't understand why Derek eventually didn't choice his mother-in-law Jocelyn who got to accept his fertile cum into her fruitful womb aggressively.
I am looking forward to read your another story or the sequal where Derek and Jocelyn will appear again as a May-December couple.
Superb story. Personally would have liked it more if Jocelyn was the one with the best body (biggest tits and ass in the family) so that Derek falls for her. Still this is one awesome story!
But what really makes me all giddy inside is your upcoming mom/son story. If it manages to come close in length and style to this one it just might be something special. Looking forward to it!
When I was reading on the first page I can't believe that Helena had more energy to pull him on the bed while he who couldn't even stand.
I raed all your stories, they all turn me on! in this uniqe story I found the 4 part the best. Joceline was the best carecter and I hope you will write more stories about "momy and son" relatiomship with lot's of domination and humiliation
please' keep writing
This story would be so much better if you cut out 80% of this crap
It would be good though if there is a shock change in terms of the story and have all the wronged women and men in previous stories to rise up in vengeance. This is because it gets kinda boring if all you do is reduce people to tears. But if you could, could you wreak havoc on the family, nina and Audrey. To get a good, movie like good beats evil kinda thing.
This whole series was the best I've read on here ever. Good work, congrats, amazing work, can't wait to see what you'll come up with next.
All your stories are great to read but I think this series is the most fun and captivating. Awesome work!!!
After the Resident Evil 8 trailer came out I´m picturing the GILF in this story as Lady Dimitrescus