All Comments on 'The Club'

Where can I find one? lol... Wonderfully written

Most, if not all, husbands would have asked a few, very direct questions about the club before going in and certainly when they had entered. No man I know would have let himself been blindfolded in that kind of setting. And any faithful husband would have been up and out the door when the clothes started to come off and the naked bodies started to float around. Regardless of what his wife was saying. Too many unknowns. Interesting, if unbelievable, story.

very well written erotic and keeping the suspense

Way too short, but well written story so far. A slow seduction story like this needs to be a minimum of two full pages. The choice to brake the story into at least two parts probably three, makes me feel as if you rushed. I'm guessing you want to raise your story count but this method only makes you seem lazy. Unfortunate editing error on the very first word. ... Slow down, finish your work. You're a good writer, act like it.

One star until you finish this.

In over 7 years???!!!