All Comments on 'The Club Banquet'

Enjoyable read with credible plot. Well written and would love to read more.

I loved reading this. A writer who shows, not tells... A plot that works its way gently towards the sex rather than jumping straight in... and some utterly gorgeously hot sex! All wrapped up in some fabulously descriptive and realistic writing. You must write more, Helen1954... my only disappointment is discovering you only have one other story on Lit that I can read!

...of most ladies, forcible sex. Had a GF who loved being tied up and "forced" to suck my cock and have her pussy licked for hours.

Loved how easily she would cum, time after time.

Love your stor and how you make your readers SEE your story, rather than read it.

Lee

I loved the fantasies and how they talked about them. Keep it up.

This was great. I will be back to read it agian. I just ask that you edit it to fix the character's name. Is she Mrs. Henderson or Mrs. Anderson?

plan longer and more complicated stories since mature women are incredibly insightful, thoughtful, and compassionate. You are a very welcome author for this site.

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