All Comments on 'The Coffee Boy'

Trusting there will be a follow up to Patrick's secret shopper's experience!

Found the story quite engaging on a few different levels. Once again, looking forward to your follow up or more, Thank YOU.

Lovely story, well written and very engaging. You really did a good job capturing the events and making them real. Nicely done!

Not too much, not too little.

Just right!

Great story, nicely paced and believable. A great addition to your collection, which all have that 'Englishness' about them, loving your work Ems!

Loved the story easy to follow. It seemed like something that could really happen which made it even better. Keep up the good work.

Difficult to read??!? Honestly, I don't even have a cogent reply for that other than, if this was difficult for you to read, then you really need to go back to Dick and Jane. Mouth breather.

Crazeems - I enjoyed this story immensely. The British colloquialisms added a delightful touch to an already entertaining read. Thanks for making my evening a bit brighter.

What I like about this story, and others by Crazeems, is the realistic background and behaviour of the characters ... and the British settings, for a nice change.

As for the dolt who finds Crazeems too difficult to read. Little boy, you are not suppose to be on an Adult site. Now get out of your mommie's basement (uhhmm, please wash your hands first) and get back to your Remedial Reading class.

Fucking A. Relatable and well written, albeit with a few errors but loved it