All Comments on 'The Coffee Shop'

Nice set-up! Had me fooled and then..... Can picture the scene at the dinner. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Author you had me fooled. Who would have know that his wife was the lady in the coffee shop. I Know the other men were tossed on their rear to see he got what they didn't grt.

Please do a better job of proofreading! Your transitions from one scene to another are messy!