All Comments on 'The Coffee Shop Pt. 04'

How is it that mine is the first comment?

Good for me!

I've read your coffee shop´s series and I'm looking forward to read more about Paul Walton.

You nearly got me killed by a heart attack when Andy was shot!

And in the border of tears when he woke!

Thank you!

Goddamn man!! I've only read the first one so far.. but holy crap 66 lit pages just this part? Wow.. I got a lot of reading to do lol 130 odd more pages to go hehe.

You really should consider publication, this would make a best seller I would say

And to anon, its the unfortunate quality of this site were people don't credit others works. Also these stories are so massive and posted so very recently that the people who will comment in future haven't been able to finish this monster series yet.

I just finished reading your series, it is the best story series on the entire archive.

You've spent years on these works and its a shame that you haven't been properly credited for all the hard work.

I look forward to reading your fifth novel when you get around to posting it :D

Thanks for the awesome and erotically charged adventure :D

This series is the best i have ever read, i truly hope there is a pt 5 coming soon.

I still am in shock just reread this and it is just as good as the first time, it has everything such range of emotions portrayed as well as some awesome scenes of hypnosis, I cant wait and anxiously salivate at the thought of number 5

They are excellent!