All Comments on 'The Collaring of Chloe Ch. 03'

longer chapters please...

These first chapters were pretty short compared to later ones, they get much longer as we go, as I found myself having a hard time keeping it to a normal length after a while.

I love the way this Is goin. Can't wait fitte the rest.

I'm very glad you are enjoying the story thus far. I hope the rest of it has lived up to your expectations. I've been very proud of how this story has developed as it's gone on.

Thank you for your comments.

Oh. I'm liking this new Master already. Clever means a lot in my book. So far, wonderful original setting. Hop on the next chapter!

I'm glad you are enjoying the story and I hope you continue to. The story started off with the intent of being only a couple parts long, but has obviously grown into something much more. I hope you find Master to continue to be to your liking and enjoy getting to know him and his pet cat. ;)

Progress is very slow, I hope it picks up bit soon.

The earlier chapters are a little bit slower than later chapters. When I first began writing this, I didn't intend for it to become what it did. It wasn't supposed to really have a plot originally, just be this couple part little thing about my own fetishes. However, when it began to turn into something more, I starting putting more effort into developing conflict. The story will pick up soon.

I will point out though, that this story doesn't ever get all that hardcore with the sex. It's aimed at being more erotic romance than pornographic. So, in the case of just hot and heavy sex, that never really develops. Just letting you know, in case that makes a difference in your continued reading.

Either way, thank you for reading this far, at least, and for commenting.