by Rhywman
But it did have several errors that detracted, such as grown for groan, missing up names (who is Debbie?) and changing tenses within paragraphs.
Don't take the negative to heart .Learn from any mistakes but do write again .
The story was enjoyable and I am quite hard after reading it
I'd rather hear about a loving wife sharing her friend with love than hearing about a man sharing his wife and she is humiliating him.