All Comments on 'The College's New Assistant Pt. 05'

ENF-Asian, this is your best yet. I think your idea to have Yumi perform as a dog is pure genius. It's a perfect vehicle to continue to break Yumi down and to continue to lead her down this road to degradation. I do love your ability to foreshadow. Of course I have not read part six yet since it has not been published. I wonder if that slightly strange aftertaste of the chocolate cookies in the dog bowl will show up in the next or a future episode? Methinks you have already gone there... One last thing. Earlier she was referred to as Yumi Yama. In this episode she is called Hiyaku Yumi. Which is it? I believe Yama may mean mountain in Japanese. Is Yumi Yama a nickname?

Thanks for your generous comment Zamm! I have gone down that path, I'm about halfway through part 6, unfortunately the real world is getting in the way, so might not get finished until next week. I should have clarified, in part 1 I've mentioned that "Hiyaku" just means "hurry" or "quickly" in Japanese. The Dean knows a little Japanese, I should probably have gone into why that is the case. Yeah I thought using the acting exercise (which is a real thing btw) would give licence to do bad things to her ;) Yama indeed does mean mountain, maybe it's appropriate given her large breasts?

Thanks for your explanation about Hiyaku. I had forgotten about that from Chapter 1. Ah, so our dean knows some Japanese? Therefore he has an interest in the culture and/or the place and thus a special interest in Yumi. Yes, this is something to explore in future chapters. I think a smart girl like Yumi may be able to use this... Oh, there are many ways to go with that! Yes, Yama makes perfect sense for Yumi given her buxom nature. I'll sit tight and wait for chapter 6.

Just submitted, will be out in a few days

I think part 5 really set the table for an exciting part 6

Your story is one of the best I have read. Well thought out and great build up. I hope you will continue this one and think of other stories to add to your folder. Thanks for writing!!!

Thanks very much for your compliments. I will keep writing many more chapters, I've got lots more ideas for Yumi. Really glad to know I can write something people like to read.

This series makes me super horny as I imagine my self in Yuma's sweet role, and also I can imagine myself in the Dean's role