All Comments on 'The Comfort of Mom'

That was just bad. I pictured someone that just had 6 cups of coffee high on caffeine telling this story at a fast pace. *

Not even worth a comment. Try writing again in another ten years or so - after you have grown up.

Not bad for your first time. Read more stories from other writers and you'll get better.

Started well but progressed into degradation. A loving son would do much better than that.

It was written by a 12 yo who had been into his dad's booze