All Comments on 'The Community at Barstock Hollow'

A fascinating introduction to what promises to be an even more fascinating whole.

Hot, well-written and well worth 5 *s.

Thank you - I look forward to chapter 2.

chilling.

looking forward to reading your other story.

You mentioned in the story that it was not normal for the males to be able to read, yet the one in question was expected to be able to read his routine.

Even for a fantasy, this was unbelievable tripe.

Because this was awful. Can't believe I wasted my time reading it.

This is just fucked up I mean I like bdsm but this is just wrong. If this actually turns anyone on then they are just fucked up people and I hope I never come across you in my life.

Never once did the story drift. I ached for detail of sex training...what duties did he perform? The depth of a very fine submission was handled beautifully and I will embellish on ideas and ambience that I have picked out from the story. How wonderful that the women were happy and carefree,with the freedom of the whole day for themselves. He on the other hand had many duties. I hope that the collar was in fact removed,so that he could carry out his submission to the absolute limit of his possibilities. Very erotic story.

I love the quality of your writing but I can't personally relate to a slave husband who has no cock, balls or sexual desire. His situation is hopeless.