All Comments on 'The Company Vacation Ch. 02'

Any man who's that big a pussy deserves to be cheated on.

Just another sad story about a moron too stupid to figure out his marriage toast. Maybe in another chapter you might let him get a backbone. No woman is worth this. Decent writing. 1

why do you write such short stories? how lazy can you be??? 1 fucking page? that's it.... at this rate you will take a long time to complete the tale. write a longer version and stop posting in installments... when do you plan to finish this? do revert on this!

the author builds up chapter 1 with the premise that the husband is enraged and stunned by the wife stunning betrayal

But in chapter 2. ... NOTHING happens... The husband sees the wife cheat a 2nd time and again says nothing... and what makes it worse is there is no explanation for this

Not a single passage telling why shes slutting around .... incomplete

There was a chance to do something interesting after the first story. Now we know. It's a cheating fuck fest, and not even a very hot one.

No more of this crap please the guys a wimp doormat.

Not even a full page? get on with it already

I like the cheating angle (as opposed to open cucking)

some hubby humiliation would be perfect seasoning

ex. wife mouth filled with bf cum (and he knows), kisses hubby.....

cum all over wife (and he knows) and she pretends its lotion and asks hubby to rub it into her skin

etc etc

verbal expressions of intimacy (love?) towards bf's as hubby spies

verbal denigration of hubby, "he's so small" "i cant feel him" as hubby listens

perhaps circumstances can made so that hubby gets zero relief, no cumming, just more and more hubby denial, ever increasing tease / sex frustration

having waiter mistake bf as husband when seating them..........stuff like that

random idea: maybe last day of vacation: island custom of "penis guillotine" small device that balls n cock fit into with release lever that drops blade, hubby puts his frustrated precum leaking erection into it on a dare from wife, wife dares him to let her dance around the release lever in pumped up high heels.....a dozen or so people watching (including bf's) and chant starts to "chop it!" wife smiles as she dances seductively, twirling, maybe stripping, often playfully stomping her high heel down right next to the release lever.....hmmmmmm

oh btw, just toss out the cuck hater comments, dumb asses who aint figured out this is cuck by chapter 2 are a special kind of stupid

I didn't like it much but reading the comments the only one that had anything real to say was long, constructive, and positive. The rest were just the usual haters being whiny and bitchy and full of venom for authors. So I have to give your story five stars to compensate a little for their nonsense. I also feel a need to point out the most hilarious typo I ever saw in a story. You wrote, "Not wanting to get caught peeing on this perversion," Ha ha ha ha.

I am convinced that the cheating partner does. But does anyone actually enjoy being cheated upon? Not in this culture, I suspect.

He clearly isn't wanted or needed and why is she the only woman there? You're telling me no other wife, partner or female could make it to an all expenses paid vacation that was given as an opportunity to thank them for their long hours of work?

I don't need hubby to get postal but his wife is cheating on him and he still hasn't fucked her yet and he's not furious. He's not even angry. He talks shout how in love with her he is....why? Why is he in love? Especially as she has betrayed him without a shred of guilt.

I agree with @Harryin VA: 1st - "Watching Victoria with Brad was horrible and stabbed me right through the heart"! And so why is he still there? He should be flying home to contact a lawyer to begin divorce and to sue the company...2nd - watching all this is he sure this is her first time cheating? She must be the new company whore...1*

Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐃𝐈𝐒𝐄𝐀𝐒𝐄𝐃 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ aka WHOREDSigne!

You have two options. Simply delete the comments if they upset you, or as you said some were doing, put your stories somewhere else to avoid the nest of vipers.

But you are right, if a story has no erotic content it does not belong in a category aimed as a specific fetish.

The author should know that, but are playing games to tweak the other factions and unfortunately the site's 'screening' process is virtually non existent. Its one person trying to get 75 or so stories a night posted so they're barely getting a glance.

My suggestion is when you see one of these, there is a report button at the bottom of the last page. Report it and put the reason as it should be in another category and give it a couple days to see what happens.

Going further BTB stories are violent, sometimes way over the top violence to the wife and lover of the wife and if there is no erotic content to even try to justify it being on lit, the truthfully they should be banned because they're breaking the rule about violence and torture here, but again....these are not looked through.

I think this will only chnage if it gets to a point where the site is seeing a large drop on stories posted there and a decrease in hits from readers. Maybe that will make then clean it up.

Truthfully at this point the majority of the category is more fitting to asstr these days than lit.

and tell people "YOU CANT SEE ME"/ tk u mlj lv nv

Get real he loves her to much so everybody gets to fuck her. Get pics you stupid o moron. That is what the author is making him. Don't know if I can read anymore. Some stupid ending coming after she gets gangbanged by all the law firm. Too bad I feel this is going to be another cuck story. Give me a break and get real no man would put up with her cheating add.

What are you trying to accomplish with this story? The wife is a cheating wanton whore and the husband is a brainless poltroon. If there is anything else here I don't see it. You can stop anytime now. I have.

one of the best LW stories on here. eat shit annony

Lighten up people it's still early, I feel a storm brewing

Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka ANON!

about the last three words.

1. Why?

2. Who Cares

You've got the characters listed and their roles explained now its time for the show. Since hiss wife is the only woman from the law firm to go on this vacation she has to be a very busy girl. Already showing signs of neglect towards her husband. So, my question is: Why did she bring him with her on this patently sexual vacation with the guys SHE works for? Is she trying to cut off his balls? Well, it looks like there's more to this story. Am waiting.

Everybody gets a ride. But hubby.......

Typical LW fare, most of the time making no sense at all. The idea is to shock and create unrealistic characters. Want explanations? Don't read any cuckold stories in loving wives, because you'll never get any. To give scores based on bias rather than content is wrong. You're doing the same thing so many anons are handing out scores to get even. Where will it stop? When you piss off a certain group of readers you'll get retaliation. That's only human nature. Everybody thinks they're right when in reality they are all wrong. I actually believe some of you enjoy bashing each other in the public feedback. Why else would you do it daily? I've been reading on this site for years and I haven't seen any changes yet, it's always the same old whining about what's supposed to be in loving wives. Who really cares? Read what you enjoy and skip what you don't. Really simple. (signed ML)

Just another femdom gay husband story. Grow a set of balls and write something that hasn't been written a thousand times before if you want a good rating.

True typical LW story, in fact so far very formula. Different flowers same room.

In the end she will become a public slut and he will become a cowardly little WACC.

Face it if he had a back bone the story would have been over already. So now it's all about her FUCKING EVERYBODY BUT the husband. How much humiliation they pile on him.

(BUT OF COURSE SHE LOVES HIM MORE THAN THE AIR SHE BREATHS)

I mean we are two chapters in, and the husband has yet to have a discussion with his wife about her behavior. Furthermore, he is jacking off instead of using the wife-I dont think he has gotten anything since he arrived. Just too frustrating to normal hetero males to follow....it is well written and has a lot of tension but it needs resolved at some near point unless this is to become pure cucky nonsense.

I agree with those who say this installment is too short, however, it is a good continuation of 01, and it did hold my interest, so I gave you a five. I do like the story line, even though it has been used a lot, but then which story line hasn’t? I do wonder about the path you take from here. To be honest, I wish I’d thought of this particular twist, since you have so many ways you can finish.

It’s your story, so I won’t make suggestions, but I am looking forward to the finish.

....and no wife. Oh, he's married to a woman, but but she's clearly a WINO (Wife In Name Only), preferring to spread for and engage in sex play with every man in her firm. In short, she's a corporate whore. I'm not asking for BTB, but a rational response to such an outrageous and massive betrayal is, in my mind the only possible recovery now, for this story. You've gone too far, and I'm nearly out of hope or respect for your hubby character.

He's gotta know by now, that every man there (and she's the only woman!?!?!??) has been cuckolding him for at least a year. If her "extra tough schedule" has been taking her from him for that long, it's a sure bet she was fucking around with someone at work for considerably longer.

No one just steps into that scale of the oldest profession without a long warmup. She obviously loves her "work" and having hubby along was obviously part of an inside joke....on him. These affronts are intolerable. Any real man would respond/retaliate.

So, if he's not going to take action to "make it right" and he's not going to hunt down some pussy for himself (NOT hers, ever again), then he's the joke and the real pussy in a his story and you're another cuck-writer statistic.

Obviously, SS has taken the role of advisor and is promoting her agenda. "Yeah, he should just suck it up. No need ever to divorce over her perfidy. No, he should accept and embrace her "extended sexual needs" and watch with awe and happiness that she can take so many cocks in near-constant rotation. That's the way it should be, right?" Obviously, this couple entered into their marriage with different views on what their vows meant (if they said any owe at all) and how marriage was supposed to work. And clearly, as angry and hurt as he is, she must be completely distracted or unaware to not see his disturbance. That doesn't square with a woman that loves her husband. After just a few years married, most woman read hubby like a book. So, either she just doesn't care at all (then why are they still married, if she has it so good and so often at the office?), or she's too distracted to notice (again, the year of late nights and weekends.....really, he had nothing to say about it?).

So where do they go from here. Upon their return, will there be another year on some major project o tie her up? Is this weekend, in part, to introduce hubby to the team he's unwittingly and undeservedly sharing his wife with? Is it a set up to "bring him in", in some fashion? Is this the "big announcement weekend"? "Hey honey, we have a little awards dinner planned tonight and you're the guest of honor! Yup, we want to say thanks for your generosity and let you know I've been promoted to management. Now that means I'm going to practically live at the office, but the pay is...well, we won't have to worry about anything anymore. Of course, I won't be taking vacations with you or coming home much any more, but I sure love you for supporting me while I do this career climb." Sure, it's a great career climb. She's a fucking secretary...literally. Fucking everyone from the partners to the potential clients, helping to keep people relaxed and clients amenable. I'm surprised they don't have a whole staff of gals like her. I can't imagine one woman taking on that many cocks all day every day and all night, every night for a year and even allowing hubby to come near her. She must have a colossal sexual appetite. Well, he should go into porn, where she could at least use that talent to make her fortune. And the cocks are far better in porn than in the corporate world in general.

Yup, dropping in esteem and ratings, like a rock....

Author, your story is coming on fine and you should just ignore those childish posts as they are so much mental masturbation. A great believer in freedom of speech I would never attempt to silence them. On the other hand, that is effectively what they are trying to do to you and as a writer, you should never let that happen. Keep on writing and I for one will keep on reading.

fag cuck shit.

Don't think you'll be in the running for "best of the year" award in loving wives. Now before any of you trash readers get all bend out of shape, I have the same right to an opinion as you do, so shut the fuck up. Your whining is just as annoying as mine. It's called an equalizer.

It's definitely up there with the worst tales on this site, pity the moderators don't allow minus ratings, it would rate as a minus 5*

It IS better han Ch1, but that is damning with faint praise. Too short, although it may have been a convenient 'tense point' on which to await the next chapter.

ANON 'Company Bike' sounds about right. Perhaps LL69 should have read 'Separate Vacations' by DQS1 about how to arrange a company vacation that helps keep embarrassing spouses away! The chronology here is VERY casual ... the couple wakes up, has coffee, goes out to pool, then Hubby goes back in for a nap (early afternnon?). Sweetie erotomodels for one of the party which Hubby 'lucks into' watching. Hubby returns to room, Sweetie walks an undetermined distance to go upstairs 'wearing her prize' in public, but is shocked that Hubby is in the room (she knew he was going for a nap!) and goes into bathroom to 'get ready for supper?' Time flies when you're having fun - getting a 'string of pearl jam!'

It sounds like it is a relatively small law-practice or the uninvited staff are going to be feeling the discrimination. As was pointed out earlier, is Sweetie the only secretsry there? Or the only Bike? Great for company morale! If she is the only bike, WHY would the partners invite and pay for Hubby?

Your solution would make that a btb story. Never going to happen with a willing cuckold tale. This guys is supposed to be an idiot and enjoy the humiliation. Packing up and filing for a divorce or filing lawsuits is not in the works, unless the author has a change of heart. That really would piss off the willing cuckold lovers. Can't have that.

We know you can't post with a username, but would you mind telling us what makes this a good LW story? Your explanation is lacking. Telling anons they're assholes doesn't explain why you find this story so likeable. We know we're assholes some of you have said it enough. We get it.

Quit this shit or better quit writing

Hope he develops some courage and does something!

Hey now, that's insulting good pussy. I know pussies that have more balls than this guy. lol All in fun, got to keep everybody happy even the cuckies. They can't help themselves. Must be terrible to loath oneself when looking in a mirror.

What balls?

Get pictures it a plane go home find a lawyer divorce the bitch sue company for fraternization for millions retire and live in a south seas island forever with enough money to do as he pleases Get kids every vacation and enjoy life without the bitch

Keep it coming, you have my attention. xoxoxoxAnnette

Too bad Clark is going to let this continue. He even said it himself "I'm just too much of a pussy and too in love with her to risk this being the end of everything". Victoria has no respect or love for Clark. He is a good little puppy that pays the bills and jumps at all Victoria's requests and she controls how little sex he gets. Clark is just a front for her and she plays all the time she is at work with her multiple lovers. Clark doesn't even realize she disrespects his small assets he has as compared to her real men in her life. Hope he grows a pair and burns the Company but alas he said it all in his above quote. Nice story and it flows well.

looking at most recent comments...PLEASE don't heed them

1. publishing installments is fine, don't feel any pressure to make a whole story before you post

2. need to explain "reasons" why wife is being so hot? not. scroll scroll scroll

3. and of course the cuckold fantasy is one of the hottest, not for everyone but definitely worth the work! gets kind of boring reading comments about people hating the genre. we don't read other story genres and tell them how stupid they are!

He should wait until the trip is over or just disappear and go home without telling her. He knows now she's been cheating and the guys are all abusing him behind his back. There humiliating him and treating him like a jerk. Get as much info as you can then disappear and start legal proceedings against the firm before they figure out he knows and they still have to fly home . That will make them all suffer a little bit and maybe the lawsuit will help him after the divorce. Legal separation before she gets back. Hope this is the direction , don't make him a sissy

A cockold hubbie whore wife fantasy written by a gay woman, for gay men, what could be hotter? -5!

very nice story so far x

No one behaves this way at all, ever. So, Lovelit69, why do you write the story this way? You get excited thinking of a man being bettered by another man? This would be referred to as a gay desire. So, why don't you write about men sucking dicks? Why this poor game of pretending that women are just evil and stupid controlled by their lust like a dog in heat, and of course all men just hang out and do nothing when someone is taking a knife and stabbing them in the back. Not believable, not erotic, not exciting, not funny, what is this supposed to be?

Good questions anon. Why would anybody dream up a story like this?

Maybe to piss of the readers. That's one way to get your kicks.

5-star rating again to offset the many trashers. To me it's just sex. A man should want his woman to be pleasured. To me it doesn't matter if the husband does it or if it's someone else. As long as she gets off and is happy, all is well! Waiting for Ch. 03. Thanks.

stupid cuck shit.

This story had some potential at the very start. Is this guy going to be one of these two bit piss ants who "loves his wife so much she can suck and fuck anything and I'll still love her"? Please don't take too much more time for the readers to know if Clark has a pair of balls or not.

Tiny Tim

"A man should want his woman to be pleasured"?

Yes, as long as it's the husband that's doing the pleasuring. Can you imagine a society without some rules of behavior? I can't.

After all we aren't animals rutting in the forest. Even the animals have a sense of order rutting only to multiply.

But, since this is "fantasy" a seemingly normal one for loving wives, I guess anything is acceptable, at least for a handful like "legsfeettoes" (signed ML)

Keep it cumming. Ok, I admit I love cuck stories, and this one is off to a good start. I love that the wife is cheating with such lack of distress ion. I'm sure she won't understand why he'ms upset. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

I hope he doesn't let his wife get away with it,as well letting him getting some sort of retribution. Doesn't he have a cell phone with a camera, give the guy some credit.

Who should you pay attention to? Isn't the public feedback designed for the critic? What you're really saying is "pay attention to only what I say, not what anybody else says". Isn't that right? Do you know how to spell the word, "hypocrite". Fitting, wouldn't you say?

More PLZ!

Since this is apparently not her

first cheating instance. BTB &

dump her.

just to piss off the asshole annony!!

Please put some crazy twists into this. Make it different. A mind fuck if you can.

Well done. Keep up the good work.

fag cuck shit.

Great story, can't wait for part 3!!! For the life of me I don't know why people that aren't into cuckold stories choose to post about them. Fucking morons!

Good Story, please finish it !!!!!!!!

Hi, you need to know the difference between 'view' and 'Jew'. 'Simple mistake' or just clumsiness. Few typos so I suggest you get an editor or really 'proof-read' before submission as it spoils the story.

The story is TOTALLY REALISTIC.

It seems some readers understood the story different than me.

When a husband finds out his wife has been sleeping around, his whole world collapses. His brain can not process the info. He does not believe his own logical conclusions. Even when he sees he cheat he expects to hear some magical explanation which would fully exhonorate her.

The husband in this story also has a very strong voyeur & cuck-wannabee side, of which he hitherto was not aware at all. His voyeur side was compacted and stored in the subconscious layers of his psyche.

Trust me guys, it is not easy to be cheated on.

:-)

fag cuck shit.

Throw the lying,cheating slut overboard and pray for sharks!

swim with the sharks while we closet cuckies sail away.

CC unite!

.what a pussy he is.

Does this guy have any balls at all? He should have been on the first flight out of there to lawyer.

auto bio's are pathetic.

1 star

he has a perfectly good women in his room, just after she gave a blowjob and he is horny, but he jacks off instead of using her properly? That's the kind of shit I dont get about cucks. Even if you are going to end up divorced, fucking use her pussy hard on vacation, then break up when you get back home.

I hate wimpy cucks worse than their cheating, slut wives!!!

I am looking forward to reading Ch. 3 of the series.

just a cuck, BUT a wimp too. One star ⭐️.

Letting your wife pussy around. Lame cuck story.

Cucks and whorewives need vacations too.

" which gave me a pretty good Jew of the room" ????? ' JEW ' ??

This story is more pussywhipped, not the lovelit

Nothing here about love but everything about pussy of not just a slut instead a corporate whore

What a pathetic excuse for a man.

Dude. Pack your shit the next time she's off with one of the other attorneys. Because it's clear she is fucking them all.

Get a taxi to the airport. Fly home. Pack her shit there. Chsnge the locks on the house. Put her shit on the front porch and move on with your life.

She's a slut. She'll never change at this point. She'll fuck anything with a big dick. She's going to get an STD and kill you.. So why would or how could you stay with her?

What a shit-assed excuse for a man. He witnesses his wife having sex with others & does nothing? It's baseball bat time in the groin of the men, & a hair pulling to their room for the wife. But, with no other women around, how does he accept, even being a company vaca, that she's the ONLY woman? The least he should do is fly back home silently, after taking pictures of her in action, & find a divorce attorney. If this happened there, it's happening at work big time.

The fact that the man's portrayed as a total wimp turned me off. 2 stars -- Bob

My wife Christy actually worked for two lawyers they were husband and wife Bob and Julie. She had worked for them for nearly 10 years. They had treated her pretty good over the years. Letting her have plenty of time off when she gave birth to our 3 children. I thought that I started seeing Christy change and I asked her if something was bothering her. She said that it was a case that they were working on but couldn't talk about it. I said I understood and let it go but it just didn't seem like her. I never see her acting like this before when they even worked on a murder case. I seen Julie in the grocery store and stopped and visited for a bit. As I was getting ready to continue shopping it hit me. Julie I said. She said what Fred? I don't know how to say this but Christy has been acting different and I confronted her concerned about her and she said that it was a case that you guys were working on and that she couldn't talk about it. I understand but I'm concerned for her. Just tell me that I don't need to worry and I will give her time please tell me what you can. She actually started crying and I hugged her saying that I was sorry for upsetting her. She asked if I could go somewhere with her to talk after shopping? Sure. We finished and I put our cold things in a cooler. We actually sat in my car. She informed me that she seen Bob and Christy having sex. Talk about it mess. She and I made plans. The following week we were invited to Bob and Julie's place for a cookout. After eating we were sitting on their patio visiting. I gave Julie the signal. I said hey guys looking at Bob when are you going to get done with this big case I really miss my wife and the children asked me why she is so short with us I hope soon or I might have to get her to look for another job. Bob actually spit out his drink. He started with a line of shit that you would of thought he was in a court room. I held up my hand and said stop it Bob I know what's going on and I have already talked to a lawyer ( Julie) but I didn't say. He started again asking what was I talking about? I showed him a picture that Julie had taken. He was silent and Christy was very quiet I think afraid to talk. Julie said you SOB I'm sure glad we have a prenuptial agreement. I said Christy I think we should leave we have some problems that we need to address. It took a while but we worked through it and she changed jobs. We also had a postnatal agreement. Everything has gotten back as good as could be expected.

I hope there is a btb somewhere

More fucking cuck bullshit

without the disrespect it might be hot, but that's some hurtful behaviour.