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by jaena1873

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Waiting for more

Just love this story, can't wait for chapter 2. Thanks

nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 3 years ago

Excellent Intro

Good use of flashback to establish context and build anticipation for future scenes. Looking forward to your next, and hopefully longer, submission.

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