All Comments on 'The Complete Submission Ch. 02'

The story premise isn't bad but the word misuse is appalling. Hear should be here. Panties were trenched? Really??? Of course the more common misuse of "your" instead of the proper "you're". A spell checker can only do so much but an editor will catch these mistakes and make the story much more enjoyable to read.

Seriously hot shit, keep them coming.

brilliant hot horny story. love the reading of this very erotic story.

reading this wsas like being right there as you took the mothers hot wet pussy

very exciting great story and outstanding writing.

ignore the guy picking at your grammar, i`ve met plenty of people like that, no ideas to contribute, just like to pick

why this series wasn't so popular - too much side events and they are overwhelmingly full of explicit sex scenes, which made all MAIN sex events so cheap.

Anyway, not bad either.

Excellent, exciting, hot, creamy, submissive mom teaches a lesson in how to create a sibling rivalry in her bed. Sis and mom and son try on a large wardrobe of sexy lingerie and high heels. Then get naughty grinding each others expensive pantyhose against each other until slippery and wet. The sweet sound of silky stockings say swooch-SWOOCH! AS THE feminized son does her mom in the neon Wolford tights. "Oh MOM! I JUST LOVE THE PANTYHOSE"! MAMA UNDERSTANDS! PUT YOU NICE BABY PENIS INSIDE MOM AGAIN LIKE BEFORE AND FILL MY Cunny WITH BABY SEED son. "Yes mom, coming now. " Yes GONNA SHOOT MY SPERRY IN MOM"!

I'm sorry to Burst your bubble but shit like that doesn't happen. And even if there was a girl like that not everyone and anyone would just give I to her not possible. I know for 100% fact that I wouldn't and I know for 100% fact that my boyfriend wouldn't. So with that being said her running into only people that would is Sadistically in probable. Some people wouldn't care some people would just laugh and most would be offended and just walk away.

no girl is ever worth what you are writing here, It is a good thing this is just a story

Very very erotic.

What you write shows all women / men can realize there true potential. We all just need to let go of societies norms n let go of themselves too, n enjoy. The world n us would be a better place if we did.

{ normally love your stories but this is way OTT

The surprises continue. Although Carla and Mandi not so much. Lots of sluts uncovered. June takes center stage with her family history revealed.

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I would like to read more of this story and love more with the slave officer ha ha ha

547. Great story. I love to read the girly tales of love. Bringing in the families of the girls makes it even hotter.