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by LoganXsummers
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Anonymousalmost 12 years agoHot story with a couple of typos.
Typos can be distracting, you should spell check your story before submitting it.
It's "Crotch" not "Crouch" and "Knickers" not "Nickers"
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoWriting is enhanced by knowledge of the language
Using "nickers" instead of "knickers" is an annoying distraction. So is using "crouch" instead of "crotch". Using the right words will make your story much more readable.
LoganXsummersalmost 12 years agoAuthorThanks
I'll do better next time. :-) I'll see if I can get them fixed.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agogo all the way
A cute story. But you should have gone all the way. Don't worry about the typos. Some people are too picky!
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