All Comments on 'The Conclave Ch. 01'

Was captured with the writing style, quite quirky, yet highly descriptive.

Do you have any idea when the next chapter will be out? I'm looking forward to it...

It's already in the pipeline, friend - submitted it yesterday, so my guess would be the end of the week. It's quite a bit longer than this one, and a fair bit juicier too...

Great start to a story. Just enough to make me want to keep reading, yet not so little I got bored. Good style and attention to details, and it seems Liam it could have a great plot. Keep writing, and maybe put more chunks out, as well as extend each chunk too, so it's not just a teaser each chapter. Keep going!

All right, all right, I'll be on the lookout for part 2. Well done! All the dialogue sounded very natural, and I liked the visuals of his friend making all the rude gestures in the background. Because we all have that one friend. See you next chapter!

~Eris/D&T

I screwed up the submission for Chapter 2. Resubmitted correctly, but might be a couple more days 'til it goes up.