by raincitychild
The smoking is a personal turnoff for me. It interrupts the pace of the story. Who delays passion for a ciggerette break? The sex and dialogue were good, though. Hope to find out what happens in the morning.
Didn't like the smoking parts, kinda too much, too prevalent in the story for me.
This may be the hottest story yet by RCC. If you don't know her work, get ready to enjoy an emerging talent grow with every story. I love her writing. A cinch 5***** .
This story really belongs in the Romance category. Its unfortunate brevity could be corrected in a revised edition, and the romantic element could be enhanced by the elimination of hard phrases such as "get your ass in here, Mia" (hardly words of tenderness), and by longer love scenes to better balance out the plot.
ROMANCE comes to mind when reading this. This is a site usually congaing, Loving ( CHEATING ) WIVES. Not for romantic interludes, hooking up with old boyfriends, etc. Good story, just need to move to another section.