All Comments on 'The Conquest Club Files 01'

I could do without the conqueat club stuff, but I really enjoyed the rest of this. o would love to see more of these characters.

Very hot!

Great! More! Much more! No adverse comments, just a request for feedback from Kim regarding the nipple-clit-belly button clamp (how exactly does that work), her reactions to them and how she processes the feelings of their pain-lust fueling compulsion, please. And how that works to feed her pleasure. And how the slave collar works on her mind.

DHL

Hi DHL,

I can see if Kim is up to that. I might do a "Conquered Files" or something that shows things from the girls' perspective in the future. ;)

Thanks for reading! There is much more out there in this series.

-AC

But never. And I do mean NEVER do a rape (consent/non-consent) scene without fist agreeing on safe words.

@Anon Snowflake

No shit, Sherlock. However, if you care to read the story again, or read more into this series, you’ll see that the characters are just now learning about the BDSM scene and my protagonist is adamant about safe words as he continues on. This story was based off of a story told to me by a friend as to how he and his girlfriend got into BDSM in the first place and it was blended with the story of another couple of friends of mine as to how they had a relationship that didn’t have safe words.

Now that I got that out of the way, please repeat after me: “This is a work of Fiction. It isn’t real...”

A great read, I'll probably be binging this series over the next few days.

And while like most sane people, I'm very fond of safe safewords in concept and practice, I had to have a little laugh at the Anon who so vehemently insisted on the lack of one in this chapter being a problem - when even the main character points out that it was something that they should have had from the start, but also explains a (very reasonable) reason why they did not. Teenagers all too often don't understand safe sex, consent, and so on, much less the intricacies of best practices for a taboo adult subcommunity they likely don't have experience with.

Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, love the mix of sensual and sarcasm. Sex is an intimate act and there’s no reason why it shouldn’t be playful when the mood strikes.

Like someone else commented, I’m not sure about the concept of the Conquest Club it kind of strikes me as immature which tbf they are quite young at the outset. However it also comes across as a bit sinister too.

Either way I’m planning to read more for now.

Thanks for sharing this

Tess (UK)

The writing style was well done. The description of the sex should have been hot for those who are interested in BDSM. But that's not me and never will be. I was physically beaten as a child so spanking and pain is the same as physical abuse for me. Truth be told, it is actually a huge turn off. But making allowances for what a small group of people are into, I read through it anyway because there are small nuggets scattered around anyway. For example I loved how Kim turned to Gerry after her orgasm and said, "Marry me!" I've had that moment myself and the girl said it to me before I got into her pants. 😃 Now, addressing the interludes:

My name is Michael Weston and I used to be a spy...

Damn kids... One moment while I go and tell them to turn down the Burn Notice reruns.

😆 🤣 😂

I went totally roflmao. Burn Notice was one of my favorite shows once upon a time. I had primarily started watching it because I was a fan of Bruce Campbell. I have been ever since I saw Army Of Darkness. I'm not a fan of Horror movies because I find most of them to be just boring if not outright stupid. 😒 But that being said, I do enjoy comedies based on the horror genre. I don't know for certain if Army Of Darkness was actually meant to be a comedy, but I found it funny as hell. I had to go back and watch the other "Ash" movies, but I didn't enjoy them as much. But I started following Bruce's career and found that I liked everything that he was in. McHale's Navy (the movie), Briscoe County Jr., other stuff.

I'm also a huge Monty Python fan. I discovered The Holy Grail one night while channel surfing the UHF stations back in the 1970s. When the French catapult the cow over the wall, I was forever hooked.

I was going to bring up the fact that Kim should have provided a safe word when she was dropping her not so subtle hints after Liz passed out. But you eventually addressed that near the end. Even though I don't do that stuff I even had to get a girlfriend of mine to give me a safe word. She usually wasn't vocal during sex, even though I love that kind of feedback. I was making love to her doggy style and I hit a sensitive spot inside of her. The pleasure overwhelmed her and she squealed, blacking out. The particular sound that she made was gender neutral and in the moment, I didn't know whether or not I had hurt her. Combined with her collapse onto the bed, I feared the worst and immediately lost my erection. After she recovered, I promptly got my ass chewed out for stopping. So we agreed on 'hogwash' for our safe word.

I gave it 3/5.