All Comments on 'The Conquest of Elba Avenue Ch. 01-02'

A bit confusing as to who was where at the start, but after that, excellent.

Not the least bit confusing for me. Left me wet. Please finish.

I love the turn the story took after he was caught peeping & how he took control. His language & how he forced her to say she was fucking herself was sexy as hell. Wonderfully done. Can't wait for more chapters.

Hey not bad. But Elba ave.really???? His mom just got home he hasn't nailed her yet .just saying you advertised him doing family and more??? Get busy on next chapter dude.