by nectar_seeker
For me, the part I enjoy most revolved around the middle to last part of page 1 -
Excellent story! Very HOT! Please tell me that you are going to write more stories.
Your writing is the type that can envelope a reader where they are immersed into the story, almost living out the sensations. I hope you continue writing.
Your build your stories from real people. I like how you build up to the moment. Very natural, yet quite sensuous.