All Comments on 'The Contest Ch. 14'

And, a promise of Major Drama ahead! The suspense begins to build.

Wonderful story so far, looking forward to the next chapter.

I enjoyed the bonus kink of the double penetration scene. I think the addition of Yban has been handled skillfully. But sex is still something that happens to Rellenora. She enjoys it. But she doesn’t initiate anything! It’s frustrating. Also, is she falling in love with Yban?

I liked that you included the use of a condom (in a previous chapter). That rare in erotica. And you made the scene believable and sexy. I like that Choni is becoming a more rounded character. I’m hoping for a lesbian scene between the three Princesses! Why? Because that would be hot! Maybe Choni will end up with Yban or Rellenora’s brother. Now that Yban has been promoted, that would probably satisfy Choni’s family. So would marrying the brother of the Empress.

With her husband or both, she seems like such a lonely lost waif drowning in her own circumstances.

Causing a miscarriage could be disastrous all round.