All Comments on 'The Contract'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Brilliant

Loved it

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 12 years ago
I read it ...

... and really enjoyed it! Thank you for writing so well for us; a little more attention to the details; punctuation, capitals - things that can easily be sorted out with a careful bit of proof-reading - would have made this a five star story.

As it stands, I have given it four; I hope to be able to make that five when you submit your next copy.

Well done.

azira_afoorazira_afoorover 12 years ago
Loved it !!

Would love to read more of her journey now !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Beautifully Written

It's not my thing, but you write so eloquently that I truly enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow!!!

This story was amazing!! I absolutely loved it! At the end, when he tells her all that he will expect, you really built it up for me, and I'd absolutely LOVE to read more of the story!!!!!! You should write more of it, please... xD

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