All Comments on 'The Contractor Ch. 03-04'

Sally's change of heart was really sudden and seemed to me out of character for her, makes me curious to see what you've got up your sleeve for her.

Keep in touch when another comes along - very tight and well written!

Unless she is going to follow from a distance...or is more than she seems and doesn't like her assignment.

But I will be along for the whole trip. I thought he would have backed off first considering his previous experience.

If Sally was truly wise she keep on going.

But this is a story so she’ll be back

5/5