All Comments on 'The Contrast Ch. 02'

Its got a good plot but you desperately need an editor

Thank you for the comment. As for the editor, can you recommend me someone? How to post that I need editor?

There is a link on the stories page that says:

Volunteer Editors - Find someone to help you with your writing.

Good characters. Interesting situations. Hope you write more of this story. thanks

i do believe there will be more chapters

Here is part three. http://www.literotica.com/s/the-contrast-ch-03