All Comments on 'The Contrast Ch. 05'

I really like this story, however your spelling could use some proofreading. I hope you continue this story.

Although your command of English is not perfect, it serves the story by enhancing the fantasy. I can see Balok and Rose not quite speaking the same language, but still understanding each other.

I am a native English speaker who is also multilingual. In this case, I don't find the English errors distracting or annoying.

One page is hardly worth reading; I’m glad, at least, there are several chapters to enjoy. I’m pretty sure you meant for Balok to tell Rose NOT to open the door for anyone, but he should have mentioned she should STAY in the room until he got back, unless he thought she had enough sense to keep herself safe. Obviously not.