by bigdawg742
Very immature, on their and his part. Time to grow up.
Really enjoying the way you're weaving this tale.
Deft touch with that last line.
I find this all good fun and plenty mature.
Please continue.
The story just kind of stops. Please provide a finish.
i wish you had continued it. Not many people like cliff hangers.
It is one of the Hot story I read here... Need next chapters ASAP
Wheres the rest? You can't just leave us hanging!! Chapter 3 please!