by ABradleyLewis
I have to admit that your submission has got to be the hands down best that I have read in a very long time. Where ever you got your inspiration for this story alone you should do ever thing in your power to never lose it. I do not usually leave comments about stories, however I feel compelled to do so this time. You are a fabulous writer and should really look into writing professionally. Please keep writing and do allow anyone to ever attempt to convince you to stop.
Very hot story. I loved the development and the sex was great. I found the dialogue during the sex scene a little weird and it was distracting to move from 1st to 3rd person.