All Comments on 'The Costume Shop'

by ABradleyLewis

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I loved it!

That was so hot, sweet and sexy!

Enticing_VixenEnticing_Vixenover 16 years ago
Unbelievable!!!

I have to admit that your submission has got to be the hands down best that I have read in a very long time. Where ever you got your inspiration for this story alone you should do ever thing in your power to never lose it. I do not usually leave comments about stories, however I feel compelled to do so this time. You are a fabulous writer and should really look into writing professionally. Please keep writing and do allow anyone to ever attempt to convince you to stop.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Hot!

Very hot story. I loved the development and the sex was great. I found the dialogue during the sex scene a little weird and it was distracting to move from 1st to 3rd person.

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