All Comments on 'The Country Club Ch. 05'

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EmirusEmirusabout 6 years ago
Spoilt

I would say that I enjoyed about 75% of this story. What spoilt it for me was the antics of Leon and his friends.

In my mind there is a chasm between the m/f or f/m consensual erotic behaviour and discipline that both parties enjoy and the callous behaviour of Leon and his friends towards his bride and the bridesmaids it wasn’t my cup of tea at all. The remote control of the vibrating dildos not with the intention of giving pleasure to the women and heightening their excitement of what was to come but pure cruelty to satisfy the sadistic nature of the men did nothing for me whatsoever.

Apart from that another great story.

I think that one night in the not to distant future Leon will be woken by a severe stabbing pain as Steph hacks his cock and balls off before slitting his throat. She then gets a not guilty verdict because if her dead husband being insane.

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