All Comments on 'The Courier Ch. 08'

hit me , some of the way you have written the danubian culture is a mix of marxism and buddism in the way criminals are treated harshly for insignificant transgressions( 10 lashs even if they leave the zone through no fault of their own ) to the paths ( which is buddist to an extent) keep these stories going , i think you have hit in a very intersting concept

The previous comment about this story being too slow to be enjoyable and I completely disagree I started with Maragana Girl and proceeded to this story and fully look forward to reading all of your stories! You are truly talented and I enjoy living even temporarily in the world your mind has so eloquently created!

..... to unfold. After a dramatic beginning, the story artfully begins to take it's course. I am enjoying it thoroughly. Enough said.

I too am just starting the journey of Maria. Story started harsh but turned into a review of life in general. I feel compelled to read the following chapters. Well written story and thank you.