All Comments on 'The Cousin'

It never occureed to you that 'Bill' had his own demons to deal with? First off, you don't really think he's all that 'good looking'. Be honest, you think he's a tall, skinny mutt with an overbite, right? You only have your big tits to worry about & you didn't really put across a good image. Secondly, it turns out that Bill has a slightly overlarge cock. A cock that he's probably only gotten to "use" the way it's supposed to be used a couple of times in his life. Seems to me that you both have confidence problems. Kind of like the pot calling the kettle black.

Your story was very descriptive, I enjoyed your writing style but I had a problem with a few of your grammatical errors. You have talent so I hope that you keep on submitting stories. I am new to this and I do not write perfect either, perhaps we can help each other out.

Don't you wish you went to school, now that you have attempted to write