by BlueMuffin
Yours is the first story I've been regularly keeping up with on this site, and I really hope you see it through to the end; it is just that great!
all kinds of options chase and tribes to meet, enjoyed the first 3 looking forward to reading the rest
I saw a few instances where you used 'their' instead of 'there' where it was needed instead.
Also the armor you are refering to is mail not male.
I enjoy the stories and look forward to seein more from you. :D
I should be uploading the chapter to Literotica for review on Monday or Tuesday night.
Dude, if you're gonna go through the trouble of branding someone a virgin, why would you have them get fucked senseless? Try to include softer scenes, maybe the presence of pain or blood from the cherry. Apart from that, solid story