All Comments on 'The Coward and the Wolf Ch. 03'

by BlueMuffin

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Keep up the good work!

Yours is the first story I've been regularly keeping up with on this site, and I really hope you see it through to the end; it is just that great!

WanderingaimlesslyWanderingaimlesslyabout 10 years ago
lol

all kinds of options chase and tribes to meet, enjoyed the first 3 looking forward to reading the rest

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Love it!

Adore the series so far! Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

great story

can't wait for the next installment(s)

Kaleb_BartlettKaleb_Bartlettabout 10 years ago
just a few nit picky things

I saw a few instances where you used 'their' instead of 'there' where it was needed instead.

Also the armor you are refering to is mail not male.

I enjoy the stories and look forward to seein more from you. :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Keep it up! Story's getting good!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Update soon?

Great story! How soon could we see an update?

BlueMuffinBlueMuffinabout 10 years agoAuthor
Soon, my pretties, soon...

I should be uploading the chapter to Literotica for review on Monday or Tuesday night.

TechyMarinesTechyMarinesover 7 years ago
Sooooooo good

These just get better and better. Don't stop doing these

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
OMFG!

This story is hilarious!

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Virgin?

Dude, if you're gonna go through the trouble of branding someone a virgin, why would you have them get fucked senseless? Try to include softer scenes, maybe the presence of pain or blood from the cherry. Apart from that, solid story

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