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All Comments on 'The Creation of a Glitch'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Gross, seriously. Keep the weird shit in Sci-Fi, or if your reader is actually meant to get off on the Transformation shit, in Fetish.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Ask someone to edit for you...

The story changes from past to present tenses and back again and there are some spelling errors and omissions.

I think asking someone else to help edit might also iron out concept, direction & plot development.

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