All Comments on 'The Creation of M.P.S.'

and very interesting. Filled with lots of details that made this an enjoyable story to read. My only problem concerning the writing is that some of the paragraphs were overly long. A nicely done tale with a small twist at the end.

This is a true Loving Wife story. Lots of good sex and nobody has to get a lawyer.

to read it. It off in mentally ill land in some way or form. Try the fetish category.

Bravo! Gutsy story: "be careful of what you wish for"... I am glad that this marriage ended up as strong and fulfilling for both as it was, and at the end they found out that flirting with fire can burn as well as heat. Creating a Personal Slut is dangerous territory to tread!

Thankfully, looks like they learned their lessons before incredible stupidity ruined it all and they went too far!

Long story but I got through it and loved the ending. Cool. Thanks,

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Husband and wife work out their sexual issues and are stronger for it. Wonderful LW story!

A very pleasant, hot, erotic read.

Not sure about the husbands ploy at the end of the story concerning Victoria secrets out fit and condom. That little Rouse was always going to be explosive for the wife !

The story could have ended very differently if the wife had actually fucked another man !