All Comments on 'The Creature and the Host'

on your first submission to Lit. I think you did a really nice job w/this story. The story line seems really fresh. It's a great stand alone story or if you wanted you could add to it.

So again congrats and I hope to read more from you in the near future!

Very good story but far too short. I would say unfinished even. There is far more left to tell and i hope you will do so soon.