All Comments on 'The Creature's Island Pt. 01'

I have no idea where this story could possibly go but I love this beginning!!

Great story, good background and very descriptive, but maybe (in my humble opinion) more detail during sex scenes, and maybe as a third party instead of first person

Is first person a bad medium? I know that third person will let you "see" more of the story, but... well, then again you may have a point, but for this story I already have it as first person, so I'll keep. I'll try for third person in my next story line.

I like this story and the potential for the rest of the story has me excited for more. For you first try it is pretty damn impressive.

Heck of an effort right out of the box! Looking forward to more.