All Comments on 'The Cruise Ch. 01'

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Raped for rapped, starred for stared. Don't rely on spellcheck alone.

Fantastic effort. Loved it. I don't share any of the other negative comments. So what if there is an occasional typo. Get a life. The author did say at the outset this is his first attempt. Please write the next chapter soon.

This is a really good starting chapter.....I cant wait for the next one...

I think this is my first time writing something here...

I loved this. I need to know how this goes. I want to see how Noah and Gabriel get to know each other (sex aside) and how Noah is going to deal with his father (you wouldn't take him into account if he wasn't playing an important role on the story).

To sum it up, I will keep an eye on you and your works. Keep going!

I really love this story. Please release the next part. I’ve been waiting for it for a long time.