All Comments on 'The Curse'

Possibly could have been expanded a bit, but good. Good read.

Yes, it was odd, but that was half the fun of it. I like your approach, and I love the offbeat storylines. You have a deft hand with dialogue, and your sex scenes are enviably good. I'm a fan, just in case you hadn't noticed.

you have a deft touch with the one liners and I did actually laugh aloud at one point, (got a strange look from my fellow passengers.) I think you can safely add me to your fanbase. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC

i liked the idea of this, but it was different than i thought it was going to be... still, nice work

Sometimes it's difficult to distinguish real life from dreams. I'm not sure which was which in this story--maybe it was a dream within a dream. Whatever, it was damned erotic. Enjoyed it.

I enjoyed this story very much but you could have have done a lot more with it.