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Click hereShe yelled, "I mean back on the street!"
I lowered my voice, "I know what you meant, and I told you I'm not a pimp. If that's what you want to go back to then no one can stop you."
"So if I run away?"
I took her hand this time and wouldn't let go when she tried to pull away, "This is Thursday. We agreed no talk about that till after Easter. Four days, that's a long time."
"I'll run away!"
I leaned against the back of the sofa. I wrapped my arms around her shoulders and pulled her back with me. She struggled to break free, but I was too strong. I leaned back with her in my arms and held her tightly till she stopped squirming. I kept holding her until I was confident she would stay still. I loosened my hold slightly, "You can't leave yet. You'll know when it's OK to leave, and when it is I won't stop you."
"When will that be?"
"Can't say just yet; I know you're not ready now. But when I think it's time, and if you're still determined you'll know."
Snidely she asked, "Oh really, how will I know."
I took my right hand and pulled her by the chin so she had to look at me, "You'll know because that's when I'll buy you your luggage."
Caprice broke free, "Get off me. I'm going to take a shower," she got up and stalked back to the bedroom.
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I guess my answer didn't work with Caprice. I'm trying to tell her if she insists on being a whore no one can stop her. I know she's convinced I'm still just a stupid farmer, but I have my hopes. Maybe I am stupid. Maybe I'm delusional. Maybe I'm looking for some kind of redemption; not for her necessarily, but maybe for me. We have church coming up. I'll pray over it.
This is the end of part two.
An author's note:
Yes, this part is a little shorter, but I thought this was a good place to stop. Now the burden is on you. I'll respect your comments and you votes, but don't just trash the story with a bunch of ones and twos. If you don't like where it's going tell me, and then just stop reading
- COMMENTS
cutedaddy6919 days agoIt's an interesting story, told by a gifted narrator. I find the amount of derogative comments on women disturbing, however. It's definitely more frequent than the story needs, as if it is something that gives you, the writer from heaven above, some kind of special satisfaction. Not sure what to think of it, but it does not make the story any better in my eyes..
Jetcrash7472 months agoIf anyone is delusional it’s her, Cayden is treating her with kid gloves. Caprice is running away from her dark past. Still a great story still 5 stars.
carvohiover 1 year agoAuthorA little missive from carvohi.
Just above this little note you might find a comment by arsenelupin66. I'd like to respond to his very generous contribution to me and to Literotica.
I'm just an old guy who has nothing better to do with his spare time than make up stories and put them out on the Internet for free hoping they might be entertaining. I am not a scholar gifted in the English language. I, like most of the people here on Literotica, write on the cuff and from the heart. I'm not writing a thesis. I'm not looking for a Pulitzer Prize. I know I make mistakes. I just want to tell a story every now and then, and if I'm lucky, I might make someone feel a little better. I hope so.
I suppose those among us who really are near sighted need to buy some spectacles that will enable them to see a little further than their noses. Sorry, I had to add that quip.
carvohi Jedd Clampett
