All Comments on 'The Daily Grind'

by Carol_J

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kizkizkizkizover 6 years ago
Cool concept

I liked the play on the video game / fantasy idea. It's interesting seeing the other side (e.g. the NPCs) . The last sentence was a little confusing, but I assume that's the intent.

dork42dork42over 6 years ago
Excellent, hope you keep it going

Really liked the first concept, daily doldrums of "working" in a dungeon. I thought, Adult Swim should make a cartoon of this, haha. Curious what happens next, does she hide the mage or does he become a pet of the dungeon as a whole before she is done with him (after filling out the necessary paperwork of course). Very original, hope you keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Cool

I really like this monsters eye view of a dungeon crawl, it's a great setting super clever. The smut was good and fit the characters well. Going into the minutiae of running a low level dungeon was actually kinda inspired

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Thanks for this great story.

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