All Comments on 'The Dance'

Really nice strip story. I love the detail particularly in the description of the clothes. I could almost be in the audience. I hope you get to write the follow up, with Ashley on stage.

for some other writers, unfortunately not the ones "writing". Oh this is fetish but does not rock my boat so it is not erotic. I liked the heading where the illeterate misspelled too each time he/she/it wrote it. The commenter who mind can only handle a set number fo words so they write over and over and over.

I hope that you are not discourged by too many morons commenting. Anyone who has had their writing edited by Lakewood is already up on most here. Write on.

Reading the comments makes me wonder if anybody literate reads things at literotica! If you're going to stomp on a writer, at least take the time to spell your criticism right. For the lady writing as 32B_minus... keep at it! I really got a charge from reading about that strip. Any chance Ashley gets to go onstage?

Not the usual type of story but certainly sexy and well written. Well done 32B_minus this was a really erotic sexy story and as someone said next chapter Ashley gets to ago on stage?

As a fellow Literotica author, I know how difficult it is to write a realistic yet sexy story. Bravo to the author. You did it!