All Comments on 'The Dance Club'

It would seem the wife is the only winner,she gets it all while he only gets to watch.she initiates the action and he gets leftovers.He should stop it before he becomes totally redundant. If she craves others so much why marry.

Little boys led around by their dicks, thats what these stories are about. Just remember, big boys take little boys toys away from them, sometimes big girls do too,so be ready to loose your toy little boy.

This is the same cuckold/wimp formula. Nothing to read here so just skip and try somewthing else

This piece of crap demonstrates the typical lack of imagination that pervades the community of wimp husband story writers. It's like they all share the same brain, and none too efficient a brain at that. I've seen this same story ten thousand times here on LIT and this one isn't even written as well as the other 9,999. What a waste of time and bandwidth.

Even though the writing skills are good, one wonders why this couple is even together. She gets all the action and he gets seconds and maybe even thirds. Doesn't sound to me like the ingredients for a happy marriage. This kind of story is not erotic but it does show just how wimpy some guys get to please their slut wives.

I didn't see the husband come off as a wimp. I thought he just enjoyed his wife having a sexy fun time. She didn't even fuck the other guy. I almost gave this story a 100 because of all those assholes who gave it a zero for not measuring up to their idea of what a man should be. I get real tired of these supposed "men" who rage about stories like this and then aren't "MAN" enough to sign their name to their comments. How come you "men" only leave anonymous comments, huh? If you don't like this kind of story, why are you reading them? It seems to me you "protest too much" and people who do that are often covering for their own insufficiencies. Anyway, I enjoyed the story, hope to see more. Regards, Roger

It sucks, try a different plot line [like a non-wimp story]!

every male of the tribe mated with a female to insure her pregnancy. The mate she was attached to fed and cared for her but all used her as a cum dump. To many of these stories talk of sub men who let more domininate men impregnate the females for them. I guess its ok, just means some of us get more tail than others, not really sure how many I have impregnated over the years and their husbands cared for them.

I didn't like the beet - nor the cuck so here's to you wimp defender - not even women can respect this kind of sick shell of a man - although one can only wonder what possesses a cuck to be excited by watching a real man fucking his wife whore.<P>

A sick opening little one.

...by the small-minded haters, aren't original either. The same exact phrases again and again, on *every single* Loving Wife story that involves more than one man, or a husband who enjoys his wife's full sexuality, and likes her to flaunt it every now and then rather than hide it. You can tell it is one poor, obsessed person posting many separate, desperately outraged responses, trying to make it appear that eight whole people hated the story. This is the same poor sad person who has read all "ten thousand identical stories on Lit" and left the same identical comments after reading each one. Who is really the "little sick one", hmmm? Perhaps this tortured soul has never heard of what psychologists call "projection"--the thing you are most upset about in other people is the thing you dislike most about yourself. Believe me, the hypocrisy is obvious to everyone but you. Or maybe you just don't realize about IP addresses, allowing Lit to see that all these supposedly different outraged people you are pretending to be, sent in all their comments from the same computer? Wow, what a coincidence, eh?

If his wife can get two cocks in her mouth at the same time either she has a really big mouth or they have little dicks.Hopefully their new friends they met in bar are clean.

white "cool" dude (or wannabe) who's into pimpin' the beautiful lovely blonde white wife, so he could enjoy the after taste in her mouth and other holes! lol

HOT!

Ed