All Comments on 'The Dance Lesson Ch. 02'

Honestly, hubby's pressing this idea too hard, and without thinking about the future consequences. He's literally pushing his wife into another man's arms, and not giving thought to what's going to happen to their marriage. Hubby's obsessed with one physical act, while his wife is enjoying the total seduction, lapping up the other guy's compliments, embracing her new expereinces, enjoying the attention from another man.

If hubby has half a brain in his head, he'd better brush up on his courting techniques and rewin her heart, because if he thinks it's going to be a one time event for her, he's going to be sadly mistaken.

The story is perfect for its niche, its genre.

Loved it.

Easy Anonymous - This is a STORY! Even if swigby likes to do this sort of thing, nobody expects YOU to. Hot Hot Story. Good buildup. This is playing out like a screenplay. Swigby is a very talented storywriter, and excuse me while I go attack my wife.

Again, very well done. Yet I'm not exactly sure of whst took place but I'll find out eventuasllly.

Come back Swigby, we miss your stories

Stay in your asylum cell.

I'm really enjoying the story. It is definitely hot. But, you've written it so well it's got me thinking that maybe I'm not ready for my fantasies to be real. I can very much see myself in the person of the questioning husband. Nice writing.

Good Build up – but story written from Husband’s point of view & when story gets to the “Good Part” hubby leaves them alone. I wish had a description of what Jack saw when they were dancing - how her breasts moved under her top - what others saw as they danced. Such good potential but not written. Maybe other authors can read this and write such a story.

The cuck is moving things forward and the shy wife will be a bold whore.