All Comments on 'The Dancer'

Good story. It would have been better if she were not so angry. And you need an editor

All young men should be involved with such a woman.

A good buildup to a great session - need a follow up. You need to proof read, spell check won't pick up words like seamen, pecking or rune to name a few. Otherwise, a top yarn.

Liked the story. Please consider writing a chapter 2! Maybe Derek could come back to the studio!

Excellent descriptions. awesome writing