All Comments on 'The Dangers of Glory Hole Dating Ch. 02'

I need to have closure..And more fucking. A lot more ;)

Why is taking all that crap from her!

This is a very powerful storyline. It really grabs you in a visceral sort of way. Keep up the great work.

The way you have painted us a picture of Grace is outstanding. It reads like a portrait where the pigments have been laced with the essence of her feminine nectar. I wonder if this might actually be someone you truly love. [Don't answer. It is none of my business.]

I also enjoy the meetings they had in the booths. Considering the environment they were in: the noise, the smells, the uncomfortably limited space those viewing booths have ... and the STICKY FLOOR(!), you still managed to convey a deepening romantic element in their relationship.

Thank you for this new chapter. I am looking forward to see how this develops.

BTW, I hope Michael calls "Swinging Jack's" to warn Jack about the sleazy bastard and his date-rape drugs.

Anything worth having is worth fighting for. Take your time and tell the story you want to tell. The mother is going to lose it when she finds out. Lily, won't she wonder why Grace is so taken by him?

Dont let it die out, go for the finish, or hopefully continuation

Please continue writing. This story is so great. I keep rooting for Mike and their relationship. He loves her so much and it's so sweet. I just want grace to accept it and for them to just be happy and in love together. The way you wrote the two scenes were they are laying in bed together is perfect. Those are my favorite parts. Keep it going! But take your time

keep the chapters coming...couldn't wait any longer for the rest...your story's pretty good and getting better

This needs a new chapter, I beg you!!!

Please please please write another chapter!!!!

I keep coming back looking for a new chapter. Pleasr write anouther

I really hope you write another chapter.

I think you captured the turmoil and tension, doubt and insecurity beautifully. This story is far more real than most. I hope you write again, but if not, what a wonderful glimpse into the lives of those two sibling lovers

This was two chapters were written very well. They were written like a romance novel. It was arousing, heartfelt, and the characters were well made, with the strong foundation for empathy, leading to a much more compassionate and compelling story.

P.s. I also like blonds

More please

Right, he would not know Jessy's email address because she would have gotten a new address to hide and all...

But he received the email... He replied back... To and From his normal every day email address. (I remember nothing about a porn only email...)

I would imagine that brothers and sisters talk... How the hell did she not it was her brother from the start!?!?!?!??? lol

I'd love to see more!

How did he not recognize his sister's voice?

Please don't end there. Keep going. I know they can't get married except In one or two states, but please get them to be together forever and with kids.

Great story line!

First off, to the guy talking about the e-mail address, the author said in the first chapter he was using a secondary, fake e-mail.

Now to my problems. Grace and Lily are both total whore cunts (literally whores). I especially dislike Lily. When she told him not to go back to the bar without explanation, if it had been me, the conversation would have gone differently.

Such as:

"Who the fuck do you think you are? A 19 year old CHILD who has never had any responsibilities, and her only worries are about getting to a college party on time, is going to tell a 23 year old grown-ass man, who works his ass off to make sure his mother doesn't become homeless and his sister can study in college with almost zero money left over for himself, what he can or can't do with his own free time? And if there was a conflict of interest because you "work" at the bar and worry about a male family member going there, you would choose your WHORING over his little happiness in his life? Go fuck yourself."

Now for Grace:

Their mom said it was a "long trip" to not stay over at the house, but Mike easily made the trips to the bar in not that long of a time where she also frequented, and in several months time, she not ONCE visited her family. She told "James" that she loved him, but on the night they first had sex, she also told him she didn't have much time because there was a really "important party" she had to attend, and she was ALREADY drunk. She has her priorities all fucked up. There is no such thing as an "important" party, and even if there was, what kind of person chooses a drunken, meaningless party over her supposed love? She's definitely future "Loving Wives" material. Also, in every sexual encounter besides the initial BJ's, she's the aggressor, but puts the blame on him for everything. I don't see what Mike sees.

Became too melodramatic in this chapter, his monologue in the bar was outright cringeworthy, quite a disappointment compared to the first chapter which was both hot and entertaining.

This is honestly my favourite story on this entire site (and the only one I've ever left a comment on) and I'm far too invested to let you end it here. So, eh, don't stop writing please

I really like the story and that you develop it and that it wasn’t all sex and I could get invested with the people in the story I really hope you continue it thanks for the great read

Wonderfully well written characters, they feel real and it's impossible not to get invested in them

This never got finished

This story was made in 2016 and never got finished. That's super unfortunate.

Good story please finish

This story could go further if you're just looking for sex and I think this story ends brilliantly where it is if you're looking for a love story. If this was an avant garde love story, you'd be happy with creating your own ending. Yeah, the author could tell us more, but who wants 3-64 more chapters of the characters just angsting and having sex with no character development. (Ok, maybe one more chapter if the author can visualise the same character arc that I can.)

To bad there is not more

Okay where is the rest of the story??

Dang... no chapter 3?