All Comments on 'The Dare'

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This is a good example proving that a fairly minimised framework and scope may still be working well for conveying strong erotic feelings.

Good teaser for a loving, caring passionate story that could lead to the three of them enjoying each other.

I have earmarked this story. I hope you continue and give us a little more back story

Wishy washy and non-committal, ugh non-erotic even.

This is ripe for a sequel. Luann may need assistance recuperating.

Profound comments! Slow in places, but well written. It is open for a sequel though you could leave it finished, and move on. Keep writing.

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