All Comments on 'The Dark Forest'

Huge error ! He told her his name and when she said it he asks how does she know?

Love the wordplay and the fact that the female was in charge! Awesome stuff!

Thanks for the feed back ill have to fix that error right away

what happened to the ending , there was none ,sorry maybe you'll do better next time ?

I double checked to make sure and he never told her his name before she mentioned it. Well written story and felt someone should mention this.

Looking forward to the next adventure! Lots of places you could go from here, so I'm curious to see which root you take. (I know.. bad pun!) :)

Very well written story. The details were perfectly described and I like that you didn't do anything over the top. Definitely bookmarking it.

Just silly. 2*