by CC_Ryder
...and I loved it! Hope chapter 3 is coming soon...
I really hope we don't have to wait too long for the next chapter. Loved it, can't wait for more.
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! PLEASE DON'T MAKE US WAIT TOO LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now that was a snapshot right out of hell! I loved it! Beautiful! Jeremy is just such a freshman in so many ways, and Bryan is such a cocky upperclassman, yet still so desperately needy. You've really captured these characters 100%. It's kind of astonishing. I'll be waiting with baited breath (and a loaded Nykon) for chapter 3. Really excellent writing...
I can see now Carson is going to be a problem, i dislike him already!!
POOR JEREMY!!!!!!! But wowzers GREAT chapter! Can't wait for # 3
i felt the heat and the embarassment. young love is amazing. especially when you can't get enough, just like this story. cant wait to see how it develops. i like the protaganist carson, he should be a useful foil and i like that jeremy has someone he can talk to (stephan) besides bryan when things don't go or do go as planned,
Could not stop laughing! It's hot and twisted!
I just knew it will happen! Now, I am almost sure, that there will be huge difficulties for Jeremy to get the position that Keth Britton was talking about. And for Brian himself, as well. My god, what a mess Jeremy found himself in. But to be honest, this kind of saucy situation happens in real life also. LOL !
"So, what's her name?" - "Bryan" - "That's a weird name for a girl."
LOL ! LOL ! LOL !
I love your story CC_Ryder!!!
I wonder if Bryan has always fucked the cute new guy working for him... Interesting thought.