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Click here"Turn over, slut." You quickly get on all fours as he gets on the bed and mounts you. It's quicker this time. No need to ease his way inside you, it feels better now. The shape of his cock makes it seem as if you're more full than before, his cock has an easier time of stroking your g-spot. The pace increases as his left hand clutches your left wrist. He pulls it behind you as his right hand does the same. He leans back as his hands hold onto yours, you're parallel to the bed, supported only by your legs, as the thrusting continues. You've never had sex like this. What you once thought was filling you up is now overflowing, he's deeper inside you than ever before and he continues to pump away at you, stroking your g-spot with every thrust. You toss your head back, and as you do so he lets go of your wrists. You catch yourself and his hands move towards your neck. His right hand powerfully seizes your hair as his left hand moves around your neck to the front, and he begins to lightly choke you. The feel of pain from his pulling of your hair, the tingling sensation of reduced blood flowing to your head, all the while his cock still hammering away at your pussy. You can hear the sound of his balls slapping against you.
He withdraws his cock from you and flips you over. He once again inserts his stiff cock inside you. As his cock continues to lunge inside you, your eyes meet each other once more. His hazel eyes have turned brown now. You can't tell if his eyes have returned to being soft and gentle or still have a look of mischievousness. You can feel his member throbbing inside you. The sound of his balls begins to change. He's getting close. With a grunt he begins to climax and cum. His cock is pulsating inside you, and now his thrusting slows. He leans forward. Your lips finally touch each other. His tongue darts inside your mouth, searching it, aiming to find each nook and cranny. Your tongues intertwine, each of you exploring the other. His head begins to retreat, but his lips grab hold of your lower lip and pulls them with him. His head is finally too far back and your lips unlock. He looks deeply into your eyes. His right hand reaches above your left eye. The strand of hair that was undone before, he takes hold of and curls it around your ear. He slowly pulls away and settles onto his side of the bed. You don't move. Satiated, you let a wave of exhaustion take hold of you.
FIN
- COMMENTS
phistastyover 7 years agoAuthorHi Anon. So I wrote this specifically for someone I know, she being the main character. I did not originally intend it to be used for public consumption, but she urged me to do so. That said, I see the role of the reader as a voyeur, a very specific type. Such that the reader is an observer as the narrator speaks directly to the subject, the "you". Following that idea, the reader is not now, nor ever to have taken on the role of "you" - doing so is next to impossible for a male reader, as it is also difficult for a female reader who does not have similar sexual tastes as the subject
Anonymousover 7 years agoNice first story. Your on comment is good to read as it can be difficult to 'see' one's own work after all the effort put into it.
This POV is so very tricky. Many readers balk at seemingly being placed into a story by use of the second person 'you.' Guys tend to really have trouble reading a female 'you' story. I'm female. Here, I felt more removed than usual. I couldn't be the typical voyeur of third person, yet felt even the 'you' in the story felt detached from what she was experiencing. (Hope that makes sense.) I did like the story, I just wanted you to know how pov impacts.
phistastyover 7 years agoAuthorThank you for the comment FASFan. That's very kind of you to say. I re-read the story and feel act 1 is a bit clunky, I don't like that I used certain adjectives too much or repeated myself in a few key places, I'll be sure to do a better job next time :)
FASfanover 7 years agoWhat a marvellous story to show us what you can do, phistasy -- this was a delight to read. Welcome, new author, and please bring us more lovely stories like this one. Very well done -- five stars and favourited.
