by talia_navar
That was fun to read - I really like your writing style. I'm looking forward to your next story!
I loved, Loved, LOVED that!!!!! Wow, a story about intimacy between people who really like and love each other, with nary a mention of freakishly sized cocks, 42DDD tits or 50 orgasms within an hour!!!!! This was wonderfully refreshing and well written!
Nicely done with friends becoming more. I like that Ben's talkative, so that we can get more of his feelings from him as opposed to completely filtered through Ella. Nice job.
Very nicely written story. I could almost feel the tension and fear as Ben decided whether to reveal his feelings. Please continue to write!
Captured real feelings and emotions. Many "friends" in same situation need encouragement to reveal true feelings. Keep writing, this is one of the best.
Your writting is so vivid. I really felt like I was there. Don't stop writting, you have an amazing talent. Do you post anywhere else?
Thank you for this story. It is extremely well-written and definitely memorable.
Just one of those stories that hit home because it's right where you are.