All Comments on 'The Dawn of a Perfect Empire'

Great story, very lovely, although now it makes me wonder... Is this story in the same universe as The Royal Cock?

Sadly, I wrote this in a single sitting and didn't give myself time to proofread it before posting. That's a huge mistake on my part and I really should proofread more often.

"Her hands move to the back of her mind and push slightly." Should that not read: !Her hands move to the back of my head and push slightly! And a number of other gross oversights. Who did your proof reading?

I got so worked up from this story. That I had to ravage my big dick lover. Then I had him read it and he got worked up again and ravaged me. So thank you for a great story.

That was one of the hottest stories I have ever read on this site! 10/10!